12.07.2010

VIScom: past project critique

though technically not a dead end iteration, i'd like to talk about one of my posters from project two...

this was my attempt to... push the envelope. one of the comments made during my midterm reviews with jamie and marty was to move outside the expected and to break out of my box more. where i'm proud of the attempt at introducing an analog element, the result is just... too much. the results i think crossed the line of taste. the "type" also isn't very legible. also, the connection between my line study and the photo has all but disappeared, which broke the goal of the poster.

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